on Beast In The Boudoir by Wendy L Schmidt Damn funny story, got me remembering and writing up my own! KC Lee on The Duke by Keith G Laufenberg I really liked this story. It seems pretty real-life to me and that's what I liked about it. Rich on The Bungalow by Leena Jayaraj This story is an absolute delight! A wonderful life affirming tale of children at a turning point in their own lives. To be read again and again! M Johnson on In His Bad Books by S. Kellow-Bingham A glimpse into a world at once ordinary, but also strangely surreal. Xena T on A Cowardly Hero by Muhammad Ashfaq ...what it successfully proves is that fancy rambling prose might sound pleasant to eye and ear, rough and rugged style may at time really be required to recreate a life which is neither very smooth, fancy and forgiving. T Spokane on  About Writing by Keith G Laufenberg I really enjoyed this story. This seems like something a creative writing teacher would give his or her students on the first day of class to read. Great message! V Nicole on A Cowardly Hero by Muhammad Ashfaq Solid stuff. A tremendous amount of effort looks to have gone into its writing. The story provides us a horripilating insight into the organizational structure of the currently biggest menace to mankind. The story makes a tough read but it is worth it if one is looking for an intellectually loaded piece. It is simple but powerful. Shazia Khanum on Geography Lesson by JF Chavoor I love this story. Paulo Friere would applaud this piece... as do I! Kudos to you. LWhensley on A Christmas Wringer by Simon Kellow-Bingham This is a very respectable modern adaptation of the old classic. Very readable...and the writing style is engaging. L Whensley on Girl on a Street Corner by Vivienne McCulloch Beautiful! That is all I can say after reading it. Flowing, lucid narrative interspersed with fresh expressions... M Ashfaq on 'Cinderella's Slipper' by Leena Jayaraj A proper fairy tale, in my view, is many-layered, simply told and has a deep, dark heart.  This one does not disappoint. V McCulloch on 'Glitch' by Ed Wood This story was enthralling I hope there is a continuation. I have read another story written by this author, again it left you wanting more. D Nicholas on 'The Iron Plank' by Muhammad Ashfaq “ It took me quite a while to understand the story, but when I did, it took me another quite a while to unfurl and peel off its layers. Ashfaq has craftily juxtaposed the Muslim religious fable and sub- fables within the political systems as prevalent in much of the Muslim world. Kudos to you as well for understanding a fiction replete with allusions not easily understandable in the Western World. God bless you for making this story available to us.” on 'Body Parts' by Kathleen Doherty I got the impression of a close mother /daughter relationship.  The story adds a bit of humor to a serious situation. I enjoyed reading it. apapawl on 'The Iron Plank' by Muhammad Ashfaq A gripping round up of chilling rites. A. Haider